Site Review: FUMC Siloam Springs
July 5, 2007 – 4:30 pmChurch: First UMC - Siloam Springs, AR
URL: http://www.fumcss.com/

Initial thoughts
For the second site in a row, the first thing I see when I open the page is a big picture of the church building. I think this keeps happening because too many people consider their facility to be their “church”. Nope. The people inside are the church, so the people should be the first thing I see on your site.
The quick links next to the church photo are great. We’ll explore those in a minute.
The “Breaking Bread Menu” is about a month out of date. That never looks good.
The “Contact Us” is always good to have on the home page.
The page title is awful - “www.fumcss.com”? That should be more people friendly. We’ll get into that in the Search Engine Optimization section.
Browsing around
So, I went into “When & Where”. This is a great page! It’s easy to read and has great information. Also, this is a fine place for a picture of your building. I want to know about your worship services, so there’s a photo of the inside of the sanctuary - perfect! My only complaint is the lack of links. Each of your services should be linked to a page with more info about them.
I just noticed that URL didn’t change. I realized that you’ve masked your own over the GBGM URL. While I can see the reasons for doing that, it makes things much worse for your end users. What if I want to send my wife a link to a specifc page? I can’t, because every URL is the same…
Next, I went back to the home page to see “What to Expect”. It’s a nice page, but it seems focused on talking about how great the church is, rather than preparing me to feel comfortable. I’d rather know what style of worship I’m getting into, what kind of clothes to wear — stuff like that. It’s great that I’ll “probably notice people caring for one another in various ways”, but that text doesn’t mean a thing until I see it happen first-hand.
The “FAQ” linked from the home page is great. Again, though, it simply needs more links.
Next up I went to the Staff page. Not much there. At the very least I expected some photos. As I’ve told others, I suggest creating a separate page for each staff member so that you can link to their page whenever you mention them. This section needs a lot of beefing up.
The “map” link at the top was a surprise - it just took me off to MapQuest! I thought the “When & Where” page was great, with some specific directions in there. Link to that page (or even a dedicated “directions” page) and only give the MapQuest link at the end if they still need more help.
Search engine optimization
The first thing you need to do here is fix your URL. While I think having the GBGM URL show up is kind of ugly, it certainly beats hiding it the whole time. Hiding means I can’t give a link to anyone else, I can’t bookmark a specific page and the search engines will have a hard time indexing your content.
As I mentioned at the top, the title tags are awful. However, you can’t do much about that until you fix the URLs.
You use H1 tags very well.
As I’ve said before, you need to add a whole lot more internal links. To copy from the previous review I did — “As a general rule, link everything you can. If you mention a building, link to the page with details on that building. If you mention a staff member, link to their page. If you mention a ministry, link to the page with more info about that ministry.”
The code on each page is very strange. Each line of code is separated by about 10 blank lines. If nothing else, that’s making your pages a big larger and slower to download. It appears to be pretty well-written code, but just spaced very oddly.
Conclusion
This site is off to a good start and I have just a few suggstions:
- Fix the URL / masking thing.
- The email link on the top of the homepage is broken. It appears you forgot the “mailto:” part of it.
- Get rid of the church building on the home page.
- The “search” box never works. I couldn’t get it to do anything in either Firefox or Internet Explorer.
- Update/Remove the “Breaking Bread Menu”.
- Add more internal links everywhere.
Any other suggestions for them or thoughts about what I’ve said? Leave them in the comments below.






