March 7, 2008 – 4:39 pm
Church: First UMC - Clarion, PA
URL: http://www.fumc-clarion.org/
Let’s start with the good news — this site has a well-done page title. Now that we have that out of the way, let’s get to work.
First off, I hate frames. There were some decent reasons for having them 10 years ago, but no excuse any more. You can’t bookmark an individual page, you can’t change titles on each page, external sites can’t link to a particular page, Google doesn’t index them well, they don’t work well on mobile browsers, etc. Step one is to get rid of those. You can keep your menu on the side of every page using a different method, such as SSI or PHP.
Next, why the graphical-based navigation? I let Crestline get away with it because they used some nice graphics, but in this case it needs to go. Change those to plain text, then style the background to look like buttons.
I don’t understand the header on the top of the site. Why are you telling me the URL again? I’m already on the page! Also, there’s no reason to use a verizon e-mail address, especially if it’s that prominent on the page. Your registrar and/or web host can set-up a simple forward, so that e-mail from “info@fumc-clarion.org” forwards over to your verizon account, allowing you to promote a much better looking e-mail address.
The Building Committee Master Plan is ok, but it breaks two major rules — don’t surprise me with a PDF and don’t say “click here”. If you have a PDF, make it very clear before the user clicks. Here is a good example (scroll down).
You did a good job with a prominent link to your worship information, which leads to a page with good info on it. I still have a few questions (”what do I wear?” being one), but you cover things pretty well.
Being new to your site, I clicked the “Visitors” link. The resulting page isn’t bad. You provide an address, phone and e-mail, which is always good.
Next, I decided to explore some ministries. Do you not have any youth? Or children? I see the daycare, but nothing about Sunday School for kids, VBS, etc.
Ahh, there it is — “church school”. I had no idea. Once I get there, it’s a pretty good page. I like the links to the floorplans, so I have some idea where I’m going.
Some church sites focus too much on their building, and you don’t have a problem with that. However, having never been to the church before, I’d love to see a picture of the outside somewhere — maybe on the “Find us” page. If I was coming to visit for the first time, I’d like to have some idea of what I’m looking for.
You could stand to mix a few more links into the text on the site. For example, on the “Disciple Bible Study” page (I can’t link to it because of the frames…), you say to “contact the church office” at the bottom. Why not link that to the “Talk to us” page?
Small thing — the copyright link at the bottom still says 2007 on some of the pages.
The graphic in the top left corner is annoying and, frankly, pretty cheesy. Looking at it honestly — do you think a non-believer will stumble on your site, see that graphic, then decide that they indeed need God? If so, then I suppose you can leave it, but I have to believe the answer is “no”.
You might want to remove the guestbook from the front page. It hasn’t had a new post in nearly three years, thus reflecting very poorly on the site.
I rarely say this — in fact, I don’t think I’ve suggested it on this blog yet — but this site probably just needs to be re-built from scratch. Most of the time, sites can be slowly improved and tweaked to become better and better. However, having to lose the frames and rebuild the navigation means that you may as well start fresh. You can certainly copy-and-paste a lot of your existing text onto the new site.
In most cases, you potentially would lose a lot of Google traffic if you did that. However, your frames and navigation style probably keep your Google traffic to a bare minimum anyhow, so I doubt there is much risk involved.
I’m sorry to be so harsh. I feel like the church is probably a wonderful community of folks, and I simply think that your site should better reflect that.
Feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments below.
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